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Have you ever seen TV shows about young Americans such as "Honey Boo Boo" or other "reality" TV shows? Contrary to popular belief, not every kid given the oportunity to pig out on junk food 24/7 will become obese. Americans are attempting to decrease calorie consumption in children. We, once again, aren't looking at the broader picture as a country and are trying to fix a large problem by targeting a small part of it. All Americans should be educated on what is healthy to eat or not eat, not just children.
Have you ever seen TV shows about young Americans such as "Honey Boo Boo" or other "reality" TV shows? Contrary to popular belief, not every kid given the oportunity to pig out on junk food 24/7 will become obese. Americans are attempting to decrease calorie consumption in children. We, once again, aren't looking at the broader picture as a country and are trying to fix a large problem by targeting a small part of it. All Americans should be educated on what is healthy to eat or not eat, not just children.
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In our society today, it is a given that every single person at one point in their life will encounter a bully. Remember how that bully made you feel, whatever they did? Bullies who set out and target the same person day after day with the intention to make them feel bad are criminals. Not only are they ruining someone's day or even in bad cases lives, the ways that they do it are sometimes illegal and could cause physical and mental harm to people usually because the bully is taking "it" out on someone else. Like teen Phoebe Prince, targets of bullies may take their lives. If a person or people drove them to this by intentionally harming them they should be held fully responsible by law.
In our society today, it is a given that every single person at one point in their life will encounter a bully. Remember how that bully made you feel, whatever they did? Bullies who set out and target the same person day after day with the intention to make them feel bad are criminals. Not only are they ruining someone's day or even in bad cases lives, the ways that they do it are sometimes illegal and could cause physical and mental harm to people usually because the bully is taking "it" out on someone else. Like teen Phoebe Prince, targets of bullies may take their lives. If a person or people drove them to this by intentionally harming them they should be held fully responsible by law.
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Everyone at one point or another in their life has seen pictures or videos of astronauts and of space. If you had the chance to go to space would you? You may be able to with The Enterprise, a spaceship owned by the company Virgin Galactic, which has been designed to take six passengers at a time to space. Eventually, like everything else, we are going to be able to go to space. People, however, should not be able to because they won’t have the proper training, low gravity weakens the immune system, and people can't simply seem to follow rules now a days. People shouldn't be able to go to space because there are countless reasons why it's unsafe.
Everyone at one point or another in their life has seen pictures or videos of astronauts and of space. If you had the chance to go to space would you? You may be able to with The Enterprise, a spaceship owned by the company Virgin Galactic, which has been designed to take six passengers at a time to space. Eventually, like everything else, we are going to be able to go to space. People, however, should not be able to because they won’t have the proper training, low gravity weakens the immune system, and people can't simply seem to follow rules now a days. People shouldn't be able to go to space because there are countless reasons why it's unsafe.